This has got to be the most tricky, or perhaps the most difficult chapter outline I've finished so far. Since I've already got the story planned out and I've got plenty of notes about what's going to happen when, generally a chapter outline is pretty simple, I can bang it out in a few days and then tweak it as I go and as needed.
This one I ended up doing, then undoing, then redoing multiple times trying to hammer it into shape.
The biggest issue is that I've essentially got two chapters here, an A and B side that I want to link together so I want to make sure the timelines are going to match up for this chapter and the one that'll come later.
At first I thought I'd abandon that idea and instead of having a second Say'ri chapter just do one for Kagerou with Say'ri's "development" happening in the background, but then it was simply unwieldy, it was going to become way too massive a chapter if I was going to do any justice to either character.
So I did wind up going back to a Say'ri chapter with a Kagerou one to follow, but... well, I'm worried it's still going to be too big, you'll see for yourself with the chapter outlines, I'm probably gonna have to cut or trim down some of theses scenes if I want this out before December haha.
I'll aim for before November for now though, but we'll see.
-J
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