I mentioned before that I was wondering if maybe stopping the previous
chapter with Bell's meeting with Cassandra wasn't the best breakpoint-
because of what's to come, I thought it might be a little premature.
Well,
while I was away with family over Easter, I was weighing it up and
after a good deal of deliberation I decided to extent Ch14 a little
more. So since coming back, writing that scene up has been pretty much
all I've done!
So, I'll add this into Ch14.
I was meant to
have the Public Release out by now, but I wanted to give you guys a
chance to see it first, so I'll load it here and then put it as the
public release a little later on.
I've added it to the previous
link: https://subscribestar.adult/jldavenport
Or
if you just want to read the new excerpt:
https://subscribestar.adult/jldavenport
Phew!
Took
some doing, and now the chapter is gonna be bigger, but I don't feel
like it's *too* unwieldy big, and I think this is a better stopping
point. Lemme know what you think!
And more importantly, Happy Easter. Hope you all had a great time and a good break.
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-J
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