Weekly Update

Probably not to anyone's great surprise, I haven't managed to finish in time for Christmas. Mostly because the few days I had dedicated, set aside for writing ended up being taken up by family. Fun overall, of course, but not very productive.

 

I literally got up early today, got everything I needed to do sorted, sat down to start actually writing because I wanted to either get a chapter finished to upload before Christmas or at least get some real progress done and be close... But then right as I get started my brother uses the key I'd given him to open up my house.

 

Apparently he'd checked out of the hotel/appartment he was staying in today and was coming over to crash with me instead. And he's brought his Switch so he could play BoTW on my TV (which doubles as my computer monitor, it's a large TV which makes for a nice monitor). 

 

Ahwell, more importantly, Merry Christmas everyone! Look for more from me soon!

 

-J

Weekly Update

Not a lot to say this week, still slogging away, making progress as I can. I'm sticking to my claim that I'll be aiming to have this chapter up before Christmas/NY, but seeing as I've just found out that I'm apparently going to be hosting family from the 20th, I may need to amend that, as things play out.

I'll update more as I know more.

 

I did manage to lose 300 orbs in FEH, only to find out that Echidna is apparently a 4/5* unit rather than just a 4* though, so that's... something...

Weekly Update

Just a relatively small update today, and kind'a late at night since it took a while transferring everything across to text/GoogleDocs.

Still a lot to do. It's a busy time of year with a lot of things delaying me (apparently work Christmas dinner tomorrow, which ends sometime around midnight, so doubtful I'll get anything done) but I'm still aiming to be done before Christmas.

-J

Weekly Update

Ch18 Story Outline is finished and will be uploaded on Patreon shortly.

Goddamn it's huge though, I've written overly detailed notes, sometimes basically all but writing out a full scene, but still, it's clocking in at 10,000 words of notes. Considering I've seen 4-5k word outlines turn into 20k stories, I'm a little worried this one may end up being a bit unwieldy.

Especially since it's only got one sex-scene. That's a big chapter to just have one actual proper sex scene at the end.

Definitely interested in any feedback here:

Should I cut out the backstory stuff and just gloss over or imply it? Is it enough to be told that Say'ri loves Robin, should we see why she does? At least when I did the Tharja flashback, it was Robin and Tharja having sex.

Or go the whole other way and give a full dedicated chapter to their past in Valm, to cover her and Tiki's emotions. Any sex scenes here would be between Robin and Lissa obviously, given the time period. Or maybe do something fun and put Robin with Kagerou too, which would give their meeting in the present a reunion aspect.

Or should I trim the fat through the story more, are there scenes that just serve for world/character building that should be cut?

Or do you think it's fine as is?

Because I'm so concerned about this, I'm gonna open up the Viewing version to every Patreon rather than locking it away at the $50 tier. That's not exactly fair to anyone at that tier, so I'll bump the editing version down to the $50 tier instead.

Otherwise, all feedback welcomed! Hopefully you think it'll be a fun chapter and will look forward to it! I worry sometimes that it's only me and one other person that actually likes Say'ri...

-J